Berzerk review on my website

[Pyromaniac605]

So i just put up a text review of Berzerk on my website check it out here and ignore that video it sucks bad. An while your at it why dont you become a member on the website and psot a comment or comment here if you want.

 

-Darren-

Edited March 7, 2010 by Pyromaniac605

[BDW]

So i just put up a text review of Berzerk on my website check it out here and ignore that video it sucks bad. An while your at it why dont you become a member on the website and psot a comment or comment here if you want.

 

-Darren-

I'll be glad to comment. You need to add punctuation and fix the plethora of run-on sentences.

[Pyromaniac605]

So i just put up a text review of Berzerk on my website check it out here and ignore that video it sucks bad. An while your at it why dont you become a member on the website and psot a comment or comment here if you want.

 

-Darren-

I'll be glad to comment. You need to add punctuation and fix the plethora of run-on sentences.

 

Yeah i'll get to that after lunch.

 

Edit: fixed it up a bit it better now.

 

Edit2: Added more info about game and working on review for *Top Secret*.

Edited March 7, 2010 by Pyromaniac605

[Pyromaniac605]

New review up go check it out.

[Miss 2600]

Berserk was one of my favorite games during my youth. I remember when I got it, too. My mom took me to Montgomery Ward (I think it was that store). I couldn't decide if I wanted Berserk or Missile Command so my mom asked a kid who was looking at the games which he preferred. He said they were both good so my mom got me both (thanks kid!).

 

You might want to add an "s" to "robot" in the sentence "the robot look nice with their rotating eyes." Also you might consider adding that new versions with the robot voice and with the tune "Mr. Roboto" have since been created. Otherwise, good review.

[Pyromaniac605]

Oops haven't gotten around to a complete spell check yet, and i could put a little note at the end saying that both the arcade and 7800 version contain voice synthesis.

 

-Darren-

 

Had most views ever today at 11 people!

Edited March 8, 2010 by Pyromaniac605

[Miss 2600]

Oops haven't gotten around to a complete spell check yet, and i could put a little note at the end saying that both the arcade and 7800 version contain voice synthesis.

 

-Darren-

 

Had most views ever today at 11 people!

 

11! cool! That's probably more than my website on silent film actor Henry B. Walthall gets in a week!

[Pyromaniac605]

Henry B. Walthall?

 

-Darren-