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They attack at night.

Remorseless, relentless approach.

The heart beats faster

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Yup. Atari always goes one better. ;)

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Okay I admit it. In fact I had to count it over twice when you pointed it out! :sad:

 

Still, I quite like it now that the middle line has 8 'bits'. I'm going to stick to that fo r my new form of English Haiku!

 

More to come later, methinks...

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