PFL #1 Posted October 19, 2013 They attack at night. Remorseless, relentless approach. The heart beats faster Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Andrew Davie #2 Posted October 19, 2013 Nice, but 5-8-5?? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PFL #3 Posted October 19, 2013 Yup. Atari always goes one better. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Andrew Davie #4 Posted October 19, 2013 Admit it... you goofed Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PFL #5 Posted October 20, 2013 Okay I admit it. In fact I had to count it over twice when you pointed it out! Still, I quite like it now that the middle line has 8 'bits'. I'm going to stick to that fo r my new form of English Haiku! More to come later, methinks... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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