PFL Posted October 19, 2013 Share Posted October 19, 2013 They attack at night. Remorseless, relentless approach. The heart beats faster Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Andrew Davie Posted October 19, 2013 Share Posted October 19, 2013 Nice, but 5-8-5?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PFL Posted October 19, 2013 Author Share Posted October 19, 2013 Yup. Atari always goes one better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Andrew Davie Posted October 19, 2013 Share Posted October 19, 2013 Admit it... you goofed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PFL Posted October 20, 2013 Author Share Posted October 20, 2013 Okay I admit it. In fact I had to count it over twice when you pointed it out! Still, I quite like it now that the middle line has 8 'bits'. I'm going to stick to that fo r my new form of English Haiku! More to come later, methinks... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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