CPUWIZ Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KevinMos3 Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 (edited) I was posting a response when it looks like you did something to the thread because it came up with a "page not found" error. Originally, the link didn't go to the post of the shirt, but after searching through the thread I assumed that's what you were referring to. The shirt is nice, but there's something about it that doesn't quite mesh well for me. I'm not sure if it's the pattern on the Jaguar logo or the placement. Maybe if the AA logo were slightly larger and the Jaguar logo were overlayed on it. Or maybe if the Jaguar logo were the same color as the AA logo. I can't quite place it. I made some quick mockups to see if I liked that layout better. I'm definitely not used to seeing a pattern on the Jaguar logo. Maybe that's what strikes me as off about it. Still not sure. Edited August 13, 2020 by KevinMos3 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CPUWIZ Posted August 13, 2020 Author Share Posted August 13, 2020 I like the second one, the first one not so much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KevinMos3 Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 I'm kinda feeling that too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+cubanismo Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 Agreed, single-color version FTW. I'm not in the habit of paying for clothes anymore (I get enough free T-shirts to get by, and my dad shorts have all the pockets I could ever need), but if these were on sale and I was ordering something from the AA store anyway, I might throw one in the cart ? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Machine Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 I like the single color one also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+orpheuswaking Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 I would prefer the AA logo in all blue and the jaguar logo solid red - and definitely not on a white shirt, maybe a heather gray 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+SabertoothRetro Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 Nice work! I like the single color version. Single color on a retro yellow or baby blue shirt would be tops. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wozencl Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 Agree with KevinMos3. The pattern on 'Jaguar' doesn't seem to work. I'd be interested in the mocked up single colour version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BuddyBuddies Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 What about putting the Jaguar logo above the AA one. While I probably wouldn’t buy one , one of the things I always check is the quality of the T-shirt and if it has a reinforced collar, that’s a must for me, once the collar is all stretched out the shirt is no good.The second design would look good on a black t-shirt too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KevinMos3 Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 I don't mean to step on any toes. I know this is not my project, but I thought I'd upload some quick mockups of some of the ideas mentioned by others. These are just quick jobs, so don't laugh too hard at the bad color edits. 7 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+cubanismo Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 (edited) Suddenly so many good ones. I like pretty much all of those, but a few comments: I wasn't onboard with the AA below Jaguar until I saw it. Now it seems like the obvious choice. It's like the AA is supporting/propping up the Jaguar, while also appearing to point to it in a way that draws your eye up to the Jaguar symbol even though I'm first drawn to the visually simpler AA logo. Quite an effect. I like the Jaguar overlaid on the AA logo too, but only on the black/dark grey shirt for some reason. Seems too busy on the white shirt. The AA blue/Jaguar red two-color versions really pop! I'm starting to want one of these now ? Edited August 13, 2020 by cubanismo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CPUWIZ Posted August 13, 2020 Author Share Posted August 13, 2020 6 hours ago, KevinMos3 said: I don't mean to step on any toes. You already fucked up the thread, thanks. Other mods would have probably just deleted your posts. 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrekMD Posted August 13, 2020 Share Posted August 13, 2020 Of the three original pictures, I like the second one on the second post. The only thing I'd suggest is trying other shirt colors as I think the logos will look better, particularly on dark colors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WAVE 1 GAMES Posted August 14, 2020 Share Posted August 14, 2020 3 hours ago, CPUWIZ said: You already fucked up the thread, thanks. Other mods would have probably just deleted your posts. I wouldn't necessarily say he fucked up the thread. According to your own poll results prior to him posting the mock ups the general consensus is people are not in favor of your design. But even with the new mock ups its still the same direction and idea. I'm curious if you go forward with the new ideas is it something you are going to offer to sell? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CPUWIZ Posted August 14, 2020 Author Share Posted August 14, 2020 1 hour ago, WAVE 1 GAMES said: I'm curious if you go forward with the new ideas is it something you are going to offer to sell? No, and my shirt is not a mockup, it's pressed vinyl. Like this one... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zerosquare Posted August 14, 2020 Share Posted August 14, 2020 What's the point of asking for feedback if you've already made it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WAVE 1 GAMES Posted August 14, 2020 Share Posted August 14, 2020 1 minute ago, Zerosquare said: What's the point of asking for feedback if you've already made it? I don't think he actually wanted feedback. I think he just wanted to know if people like his design. YES or NO only. Seems the feedback provided may have been unwelcomed based on his reply. Can't tell if he's joking or not but it is a YES or NO poll so I guess he didn't? I can't make heads or tails from his reply. I don't care for the design but maybe it's just for him to wear and he just wants to show it off. IDK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CPUWIZ Posted August 14, 2020 Author Share Posted August 14, 2020 13 minutes ago, Zerosquare said: What's the point of asking for feedback if you've already made it? Just wanted to know, my wife made it and I want to give her feedback, I can always use it for rags, as I would never wear it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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