I swiftly came to the realization that in my eagerness to get my shit out there I neglected to elaborate on something:

The first draft is done, the bare bones of the story have been put in place and that talk about publishers was me totally jumping the gun. Excitement got the better of me.

The second draft won't be a total rewrite, but I will be working on fleshing out several other characters, adding life and vibrancy to the environments and elaborating on rushed scenes that may leave the reader wanting.You could see the characters but you couldn't see the world they were living in, I hope to change that. A large amount of the dialogue will be kept intact as well as many scenes that I'm just happy with as they are. Most of the rewriting will take place in parts one and two because I frankly had no idea what I was doing, part three is a bit better written but it can no doubt be improved.

I won't be updating the site with these changes until the entire thing is finished and I've proofread it several times to fix the inevitable grammatical and spelling errors. Though I'd be more than willing to send out PDF's for those who really want to view the changes. (Probably not many of you, let's be fair here.)