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    CHARACTER PROFILES

    By CreeB,


    PROFILES
    KAYRO
    AGE: SEVENTEEN
    GENDER: MALE
    HAIR COLOR: WHITE
    EYE COLOR: BLUE
    SKIN COLOR: PEACH
    FAMILY: MOTHER AND FATHER
    CLOTHING: SCRAPS OF DISCARDED CLOTHES HE FOUND ON THE STREET
    PERSONALITY: BRAVE,,  KIND,,  RESPONSIBLE
    KAYRO IS A PEASANT ON THE PLANET POLUS..  WHEN HE DID NOT SACRIFICE HIS BELONGINGS TO THE TYRANT CEREBUS,,  HE WAS THROWN INTO THE DUNGEON TO BE PREYED ON BY THE FEARSOME HELLHOUNDS CALLED ZOTS..  OF COURSE HE SURVIVED AND REUNITED WITH HIS FAMILY..
     
     
    CEREBUS
    AGE: PROBABLY FORTIES
    GENDER: MALE
    HAIR COLOR: NONE SPECIFIED
    EYE COLOR: RED
    SKIN COLOR: NONE SPECIFIED
    FAMILY: THE ZOTS AND THE PEOPLE WHO SERVE HIM
    CLOTHING: HELMET WITH A ZIG-ZAGGED PATTERN AND ARMOR WITH RAZOR-SHARP EDGES..
    PERSONALITY: TYRANNICAL,,  EASILY ANGERED,,  SINISTER
    CEREBUS IS THE RULER OF PLANET POLUS AND THE OWNER OF THE FEARSOME HELLHOUNDS CALLED THE ZOTS..  WHENEVER SOMEONE DISPLEASES HIM HE HAS THEM SENT TO THE DUNGEON WHERE THE ZOTS WILL PREY ON THEM..  HE ALSO HAS A PERSONAL VEHICLE CALLED THE STORMRIDER..
     
     
    REDZONE
    AGE: ADULT IN AI YEARS
    GENDER: MALE
    HAIR COLOR: NONE SPECIFIED
    EYE COLOR: RED
    SKIN COLOR: PINK
    FAMILY: NONE SPECIFIED
    CLOTHING: RED ARMOR THAT LOOKS ROMAN,,  BROWN CAPE
    PERSONALITY: LOGICAL,,  COLD,,  CALCULATING
    REDZONE IS THE COMPUTER VIRUS WHO DESTROYED THE CRYPTIC COMPUTER..  HE HAS A SPECIAL WEAPON CALLED A DANTE DART..  
     
     
    BRAD
    AGE: TWENTY FIVE
    GENDER: MALE
    HAIR COLOR: BLONDE
    EYE COLOR: BLUE
    SKIN COLOR: PEACH
    FAMILY: NONE SPECIFIED
    CLOTHING: BROWN SWEATER AND CARGO PANTS
    PERSONALITY: SARCASTIC,,  INDIFFERENT,,  LAID-BACK
    BRAD IS A MALE PATIENT WHO IS AFFECTED WITH AN ABSCESS CLOSE TO HIS HEART..  AMY AND MONICA ZHAO MUST TRAVEL INSIDE HIS BODY ON A MINIATURIZED SUBMARINE TO FIGHT GERMS AND REMOVE THE ABSCESS..
     
     
    DAVID YOUNG
    AGE: TWENTY FOUR
    GENDER: MALE
    HAIR COLOR: RED
    EYE COLOR: GREEN
    SKIN COLOR: PEACH
    FAMILY: NONE SPECIFIED
    CLOTHING: BLACK LEATHER JACKET AND RIPPED SHORTS
    PERSONALITY: BRASH,,  FREE-SPIRITED,,  ALSO VERY TIMID
    DAVID IS A MALE PATIENT WHO HAS DEVELOPED A BLOOD CLOT NEAR HIS BRAIN..  LISA STEIN MUST TRAVEL INSIDE HIS BODY ON A MINIATURIZED SHIP TO MAKE WASTE OF THE CLOT..
     
     
    AMY AND MONICA ZHAO
    AGE: TWENTY EIGHT AND TWENTY NINE
    GENDER: FEMALE
    HAIR COLOR: BLACK
    EYE COLOR: GREEN
    SKIN COLOR: LIGHT YELLOW
    FAMILY: EACH OTHER
    CLOTHING: AMY WEARS A WHITE TANK TOP AND A SKIRT,,  MONICA WEARS A BLACK T-SHIRT WITH DOUBLE DENIM
    PERSONALITY: AMY IS SWEET AND CHEERFUL,,  MONICA IS ROUGH AND BOISTEROUS
    AMY AND MONICA ARE CHIC SISTERS WHO WORK AS SCIENTISTS IN STARPATH CITY..  THEY OWN A SUBMARINE AND A MICRONIZER..
     
     
    LISA STEIN
    AGE: TWENTY SEVEN
    GENDER: FEMALE
    HAIR COLOR: BLONDE
    EYE COLOR: BLUE
    SKIN COLOR: PEACH
    FAMILY: NONE SPECIFIED
    CLOTHING: A LIGHT PINK NURSES OUTFIT
    PERSONALITY: SOFT,,  GENTLE,,  CAREFUL
    LISA IS A DOCTOR WHO WORKS IN MICROBIOLOGY..  SHE OWNS A SUBMARINE AND A MICRONIZER..
     
     
    LUISA
    AGE: ELEVEN
    GENDER: FEMALE
    HAIR COLOR: BRUNETTE
    EYE COLOR: BROWN
    SKIN COLOR: LIGHT BROWN
    FAMILY: NONE SPECIFIED
    CLOTHING: A BLUE SHIRT AND PINK SHORTS
    PERSONALITY: NAÏVE,,  TIMID,,  THINKS BIG
    LUISA IS A YOUNG GIRL WHO LIVES IN SPIRIT BAY AND VENTURES INTO ZACHARY GRAVES' OLD MANSION TO FIND THE URN THAT COULD BE WORTH A FORTUNE..  SHE IS SCARED OF BATS..
     
     
     
  2. CreeB
    OK,, so growing up in the Seventies we all read DC,, right???? I think we all loved SUPERMAN,, BATMAN,, WONDER WOMAN,,  et al..
     
    But there was one hero i was ABSOLUTELY DRAWN TO..
     
    GREEN LANTERN..
     
    specifically HAL JORDAN.. i do not know why i liked him so much,, but that brownish? Reddish? Hair had me IN LOVE..  i think i started liking him the most after seeing him get hypnotized a multitude on the SUPER FRIENDS,,  like damn this guy can SUBMIT..  haha..
     
    But it was a few instances i realize hal was the real deal for me..
     
    I never had head lice in school,,  but someone else in a class i wasn't in did,,  so they sent out the notice that someone has lice and all,,  but WHAT WAS UP WITH THEIR INSISTANCE to anthropomorphize the lice,,  like there was a community living in your hair????
     
    That of course got me INTERESTED,, since i had heard horror stories from friends that lice made your head ITCH.. they shut down the school,, and with me,, that notice,, and a GREEN LANTERN hyperfixation,, I just wrote an entire story of Hal Jordan with ANTHROPOMORPHIC LICE in his hair..  i could visualize the itching in my mind..  how he went from being sassy about it to ABSOLUTELY FUCKING FERAL as the story progressed as the itching was driving him MAD.. and of course SUPERGIRL and BATGIRL were there to help him out by combing his hair,,  which just made things worse as the itching had turned into pain.. blame the PORKY PIG with the RAT STAMPEDE record for this whole interest with the anthropomorphic lice..
     
    Later when i was like 11 i owned a game called TUMMY ACHE by colorforms,,  the object of this game was to give this kid junk food until he threw up..  now first of all i ate alot of junk food and never threw up..  but something about this interested me..  so i wrote a story about hal jordan eating the same food in the game (real versions OFC),,  and getting a tummy ache + throwing up.. This time CAROL FERRIS was there to take care of him,,  pepto bismol alka seltzer..  it was oddly cute..
     
    Also when i played FANTASTIC VOYAGE for 2600 the first time,,  I imagined the patient being Hal Jordan..  this was before david so i had to make something up on the spot.. lol..
     
     
    In the Nineties when Hal became PARALLAX i was strangely like,,  "yeah i think i like hal all over again",,,  keep in mind I was 24..  i wrote a story where he got a fever,,  showing he wasn't invulnerable even if he was an unstoppable badass..  and paying homage to that first FANTASTIC VOYAGE playthrough,,  carol had to shrink and go inside him to cure it..  since parallax being bratty asf "COULDN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!!!!" Cute and savage at the same time..
     
    When steve blum did hal's voice in INJUSTICE 2 I felt my childhood return..  especially when he became a red lantern and got all angry.. reminded me of hal going FERAL in some of the stories i wrote..  i believe there was one of him with chickenpox..  yeah feel free to laugh at me.. i'm a fiend,,  and hal is why..
  3. CreeB

    HAL JORDAN GOING FERAL COMPILATION

    By CreeB,


    EXCERPTS
    By now, Hal had had enough of the itching on his head! The lice crawling and making those chattering noises... he just wanted them to stop! And there was nothing he could do about the painful itch, like the lice were digging into his scalp!
    "ALL RIGHT, I'VE HAD ENOUGH!!!!" Hal screamed at the top of his lungs. He ragingly tore at his hair, trying to PULL THE LICE OUT!!!! Eventually, this evolved into a brawling fit of scratching that felt like he was being eaten by fire ants!
    (1978/1979)
     
    Hal woke up the next morning hoping the noxious red dots were gone. But of course... nothing had changed. They were still there! This meant another day in bed; again, no fighting crime in space; just having to scratch, scratch, scratch himself until he was sore! 
    Hal clenched his fists, but he couldn't hold it in any longer.
    "WHY DO I STILL HAVE THIS????" he screamed in frustration, almost sounding like a wild animal. He dug his nails, almost CLAWS, into his itchy skin, enough to make it bleed. But it wasn't enough to make the blistering itchiness go away! He snarled.
    "I've had enough!!!!" he shouted, and nearly cried.
    (1980)
     
    "Well, Hal, there's nothing I can do for now," Carol said. "You've just gotta sweat it out."
    "Nothing?" said Parallax, dismayed. Immediately, he started fuming. "There must be SOME WAY you can do it! Some way my ring isn't telling me!"
    "I'm sorry, Hal, but--"
    In a blind rage, Parallax screeched, "BITCH!!!! I DEMAND YOU CURE ME!!!! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!!!!"
    (1994)
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